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Untitled by ~toology514:icontoology514:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


I've been feeling Oh so capsulated
[that the moon's desintegrated]
It's the new Fascination
[A ghost town evacuation]
like totalitarian rule over an occasional thought
or a blade of grass rustling in an effluvial stream named "Vile"
The sexualization of an entire nation
Caused by apes wearing goggles and gloves.
Oh how the sapient Sapien
has overtaken such a furtive locality. I beseech to the crown to mete out their titles
So I can finally get my REM sleep and
Relieve the powdery pressures under my belt buckle's enfatuation
©2005-2009 ~toology514
:icontoology514:

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~syzzlechicka1013 Sep 27, 2005, 2:08:45 PM
I like how you've tried to play on words here, but I'm not so sure it worked in certain parts. For example, "sexualization," lol. However, I absolutely love this metaphor:

"[A ghost town evacuation]"

That's incredible. Seriously.

Okay. :clap:s for you.

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we're all chior boys at best.
:iconsinistermentor:
!SinisterMentor Sep 29, 2005, 4:45:35 AM
I think this is the best of the two writings in your gallery. Probably because it would have made a cool song if properly executed. :)

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:iconsattvamanasa:
Mood: Wow! ~sattvamanasa Oct 4, 2007, 7:04:55 PM
"The sexualization of an entire nation
Caused by apes wearing goggles and gloves."

Love this one man, seriously :)
:icontoology514:
~toology514 Oct 6, 2007, 10:59:12 AM
thank you, good sir.
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